BCG/McKinsey简历避坑指南：这些'弱动词'正在毁掉你的简历

BCG / McKinsey简历避坑指南：这些"弱动词"正在毁掉你的简历

很多优秀的Candidate（包括常春藤名校生）在申请MBB时被秒拒，往往不是因为经历不够牛，而是因为简历语言（Resume Language） 太过被动。

在咨询行业，简历就是你的第一份Deliverable。如果你的简历写得不够 Results-Oriented 和 Action-Driven，面试官会默认你在工作中也会是被动的执行者。

今天我们来做一个深度的Resume Surgery（简历手术），识别并替换掉那些导致你被拒的“弱动词”。

1. The "Participation" Trap (参与陷阱)

Weak Verbs: Participated in, Assisted, Helped, Supported, Involved in.

这些词暗示你只是一个旁观者或打杂的。咨询公司想要看到的是Owner。

Scenario: 你在一个市场调研项目中负责数据收集。
Weak: "Assisted the team with data collection for a market research project."
Strong: "Executed primary market research by interviewing 30+ industry experts; synthesized qualitative findings into 3 key strategic pillars presented to the Steering Committee."

Key Action Verbs to Use: Led, Drivers, Spearheaded, Executed, Orchestrated.

2. The "Responsibility" Trap (职责陷阱)

Weak Verbs: Responsible for, Tasked with, Duties included.

这些词是在描述你的Job Description（公司让你做什么），而不是你的Achievement（你实际做成了什么）。

Scenario: 你负责管理公司的社交媒体账号。
Weak: "Responsible for managing the company's Instagram and LinkedIn accounts."
Strong: "Overhauled the corporate social media strategy; grew follower base by 40% (10k to 14k) in 6 months through data-driven content optimization."

Key Action Verbs to Use: Overhauled, Optimized, Revamped, Accelerated, Expanded.

3. The "Thinking" Trap (思考陷阱)

Weak Verbs: Thought about, Looked into, Learned, Studied.

在商业环境中，思考必须转化为产出。

Scenario: 你研究了竞争对手的定价策略。
Weak: "Studied competitor pricing strategies to understand the market."
Strong: "Benchmarked pricing structures of 5 key competitors; identified a 15% pricing gap in the premium segment and recommended a price skimming strategy to capture additional margin."

Key Action Verbs to Use: Analyzed, Modeled, Evaluated, Identified, Benchmarked.

4. The STAR Method Breakdown

为了确保你的每一段经历都无懈可击，请严格遵循 STAR 原则：

S (Situation): 简要背景（10%篇幅）。"Facing declining sales in the toys division..."
T (Task): 你的任务（隐含在Action中，不必单独写）。
A (Action): 你具体做了什么？使用了什么工具？（40%篇幅）。"Developed a linear regression model to analyze seasonality..."
R (Result): 结果如何？（50%篇幅）。"Resulting in a 10% inventory cost reduction ($200k savings) annually."

总结：Action Verbs Cheat Sheet

把这张表贴在电脑前，写简历时随时查阅：

To show Leadership: Led, Mentored, Chaired, Trained, Directed.
To show Analysis: Analyzed, Modeled, forecasted, Quantified, Audited.
To show Improvement: Optimized, Streamlined, Standardized, Automated, Reduced.
To show Creation: Built, Designed, Launched, Initiated, Founded.

#ResumeTips #ActionVerbs #BCG #McKinsey #Consulting #JobApplication #CareerDevelopment

BCG / McKinsey简历避坑指南：这些"弱动词"正在毁掉你的简历

很多优秀的Candidate（包括常春藤名校生）在申请MBB时被秒拒，往往不是因为经历不够牛，而是因为简历语言（Resume Language） 太过被动。

在咨询行业，简历就是你的第一份Deliverable。如果你的简历写得不够 Results-Oriented 和 Action-Driven，面试官会默认你在工作中也会是被动的执行者。

今天我们来做一个深度的Resume Surgery（简历手术），识别并替换掉那些导致你被拒的“弱动词”。

1. The "Participation" Trap (参与陷阱)

Weak Verbs: Participated in, Assisted, Helped, Supported, Involved in.

这些词暗示你只是一个旁观者或打杂的。咨询公司想要看到的是Owner。

Scenario: 你在一个市场调研项目中负责数据收集。
Weak: "Assisted the team with data collection for a market research project."
Strong: "Executed primary market research by interviewing 30+ industry experts; synthesized qualitative findings into 3 key strategic pillars presented to the Steering Committee."

Key Action Verbs to Use: Led, Drivers, Spearheaded, Executed, Orchestrated.

2. The "Responsibility" Trap (职责陷阱)

Weak Verbs: Responsible for, Tasked with, Duties included.

这些词是在描述你的Job Description（公司让你做什么），而不是你的Achievement（你实际做成了什么）。

Scenario: 你负责管理公司的社交媒体账号。
Weak: "Responsible for managing the company's Instagram and LinkedIn accounts."
Strong: "Overhauled the corporate social media strategy; grew follower base by 40% (10k to 14k) in 6 months through data-driven content optimization."

Key Action Verbs to Use: Overhauled, Optimized, Revamped, Accelerated, Expanded.

3. The "Thinking" Trap (思考陷阱)

Weak Verbs: Thought about, Looked into, Learned, Studied.

在商业环境中，思考必须转化为产出。

Scenario: 你研究了竞争对手的定价策略。
Weak: "Studied competitor pricing strategies to understand the market."
Strong: "Benchmarked pricing structures of 5 key competitors; identified a 15% pricing gap in the premium segment and recommended a price skimming strategy to capture additional margin."

Key Action Verbs to Use: Analyzed, Modeled, Evaluated, Identified, Benchmarked.

4. The STAR Method Breakdown

为了确保你的每一段经历都无懈可击，请严格遵循 STAR 原则：

S (Situation): 简要背景（10%篇幅）。"Facing declining sales in the toys division..."
T (Task): 你的任务（隐含在Action中，不必单独写）。
A (Action): 你具体做了什么？使用了什么工具？（40%篇幅）。"Developed a linear regression model to analyze seasonality..."
R (Result): 结果如何？（50%篇幅）。"Resulting in a 10% inventory cost reduction ($200k savings) annually."

总结：Action Verbs Cheat Sheet

把这张表贴在电脑前，写简历时随时查阅：

To show Leadership: Led, Mentored, Chaired, Trained, Directed.
To show Analysis: Analyzed, Modeled, forecasted, Quantified, Audited.
To show Improvement: Optimized, Streamlined, Standardized, Automated, Reduced.
To show Creation: Built, Designed, Launched, Initiated, Founded.

#ResumeTips #ActionVerbs #BCG #McKinsey #Consulting #JobApplication #CareerDevelopment

BCG/McKinsey简历避坑指南：这些'弱动词'正在毁掉你的简历

1. The "Participation" Trap (参与陷阱)

2. The "Responsibility" Trap (职责陷阱)

3. The "Thinking" Trap (思考陷阱)

4. The STAR Method Breakdown

总结：Action Verbs Cheat Sheet

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BCG/McKinsey简历避坑指南：这些'弱动词'正在毁掉你的简历

1. The "Participation" Trap (参与陷阱)

2. The "Responsibility" Trap (职责陷阱)

3. The "Thinking" Trap (思考陷阱)

4. The STAR Method Breakdown

总结：Action Verbs Cheat Sheet

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